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Tips for Giving Useful Critiques

Tue Apr 15, 2008, 11:19 PM
If there's one thing I've done a lot of, it's critique. I've been through numerous types - from your "oil painting of flowers" discussion of composition, colour and proportions to the "Jesus in urine" conceptual bullshit critique. I've sat through some of the most horrid critiques to possibly ever have existed, and some of the most compelling, of which could have been transcribed into books on philosophy, sociology, art theory or even rhetoric.

Over the years, I've picked up several habits that have been condusive to a helpful critique. Critique is a process by which artists discuss their work, their processes and come away with an idea of what needs more work, if anything. Critique is also a method in which art audiences can deconstruct and understand art in it's socio-historic context, and in relation to their own values in aesthetics and even in a logical or philosophical framework. Artists receive a lot of critique, but audiences tend to lack in their ability to work through critique, as the method (a systematic inquiry into the conditions and consequences of a concept or set of concepts) is not often taught in basic education and is downright discouraged in everyday interaction in our consumer driven society. If one were to engage in critique in every aspect of their life, they would question the decision to buy, and has, so far, been the adverse of what consumption is going for.

Thus, many audience members tend to fall back on simple comments that we're used to in everyday interaction, like, "it's beautiful!" or "I love it", which is astoundingly frusterating for artists who are trying to engage beyond the aesthetic level of their work.
Before I move on to the actual tips, I must give a short, but relevant disclaimer. The bulk of my studio critique training is with highly conceptual art. Square cube in the middle of the floor type conceptual. Thus, my qualification for a "successful" critique is one that delves deeper than a denotative description, or disagreement. Comments like "the anatomy is wrong" is not helpful in this sense, because it is a superficial critique. We have the goal of getting "into" the work, not just simple looking upon it.

Without further adieu, I present the Deviant Art community with my comprehensible and concise tips for a successful critique:

1. Spend time with the work you will be critiquing. You cannot expect to give a good critique if you spend thirty seconds with a piece and then jot down whatever comes to your mind first. The artist has most likely put a good deal of time into the concept, planning and execution of their work and is looking for someone who will spend a decent amount of time "reading" their art. Now, the methods of doing this differ wildly depending on who you talk to. Visual Culture critics will read art differently than classically trained sculptors. I will give you my method as an example, but it's important for you to develop one that works for you!

In reading a piece, I often read it, at first, like I would literature. I start at the top left and work my way down to the bottom right. After that, I allow my eyes to wander on the picture plane and rest on the focal point of the image. Then I will give myself a "denotative" description. Denotative means descriptive, those things that are... take this [link] for example. A denotative description would include the following:

"There is a girl, dressed, sitting on the grass. The camera angle is from above and she is looking up at me."

I will follow this with a connotative description. Connotative is a little more complicated, it's what we understand from the codes in the image. These are highly cultural understandings and will differ from person to person, and especially country to country. My particular connotative description may go as following:

"The girl is young looking, yet she is dressed up in mature fashion. It comes from the codes of fashion photography, and she is subjected to sexualization not only by her manner of dress, but also the angle from which we look down on her. We are the dominant viewer, and she is being viewed, we are positioned as dominant, if not her direct superior. She is looking directly at us, but not in a defiant way that would attempt to recapture some agency like in Manet's "Olympia", rather she is acknowledging and almost validating our presence and power over her."

At this point, I would find something interesting within my connotative description that I would want to share with the artist. If I haven't come up with anything that I feel in interesting, I don't say anything, which leads in to number 2...

2. Silence is golden. This is simple, if you don't have anything interesting to say, don't say it. Critique is not supposed to be negative or positive, it just is. "I like it" is not a critique, and subsequently "I don't like it" is also not a critique. If you simply like it, then say so with your :+fav: and leave the space (and comment reading time) to individuals who will give critique. If you feel a certain way, such as liking, disliking, offence, etc, that's for you to figure out, not the artist.

3. Assume that everything is intentional. If you go from piece to piece pointing out the flaws, this is most likely not useful to an artist. I find this is the most frusterating in my work because my "flaws" (in anatomy, composition, technique and the like) are often intentional, and are meant to go with the concept of the work. Go through your denotative and connotative descriptions and present your results assuming that every aspect of the work is meant to be like that. If the eyes on a particular drawing are too far apart, put that into your denotative and apply it to any concept that might come out in the connotative. If the artist didn't intend for the eyes to be wrong, they will pick it up in your critique of their concept, because their intention and your reading will not match up.

This is a very important part of critique, because an artist doesn't have the luxury of explaining themselves through the concept of their work. They can't be with every viewer at every minute explaining in words why they did what they did. The concept has to be made clear by, surprise surprise, their ART! My connotative description of the picture above may not be what the artist was intending, but that's irrelevant. The connotation is what's in the visual, and can not be garnered by some psychic power from the artist's brain.

If the artist of the photograph I critique did not intend to be so subjugated, perhaps she will redo the picture with a different angle and method of dress, thus my critique was successful in helping them understand how an audience will read the work.

4. Enjoy getting into discussions on your critique. Any artist that takes offense to the time you've spent in putting together a critique for them is not worth it, spend your time with someone who will appreciate it. However, don't mistake discussion for dissent, often artists ask for clarification or for you to delve further into your analysis. Be prepared to do this, and don't add anything to your connotative description that you can't continue on with (within reason of course, you shouldn't be expected to write a book to justify your position).

5. Practice critique as often as possible, even if you don't leave a comment. As with most things in life, and as with art itself, practice makes perfect. You can't expect to be the best critic overnight, it takes practice, patience and a willingness to fail. Along with your practice, get into art history, philosophy, sociology and theory on critique itself. If you're really interesting in this practice beyond the scope of Deviant Art, it's important to be well read and open to all sorts of opinions.

I'm sure there is more to say on this interesting subject, but I think this should do for now. Feel free to ask any questions, or even give critique on my tips for critique. There's nothing I love more than a good discussion!

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:iconeryns:
You are right.. My father always say that " this is horrible!" or something..He is telling me where I have mistakes and this is best for every artist..:D

( sorry for faults in text)

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:iconrockstarvanity:
I really liked this bit --> Assume that everything is intentional.

So many times on dA I've seen comments from people telling an artist how to 'fix' their work or do something 'better' (or point out an apparent flaw), when everything in the image (or poem etc) was intended to be exactly how it is. It's really frustrating when people do that and all you have to answer is 'It was supposed to look that way'.

Also, too often critique is seen as only pointing out the supposed negatives (on here anyway) rather than offering conceptual analysis.

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Ps. I posted a link to this in my most recent journal entry. People need to see this!

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:iconaniseshaw:
thanks for your support! I've noticed all these things as well, especially when I was doing a series of digitally drawn head shots and other deviants were trying to give me technical advice. It was a very conceptual piece that was going in an exhibition and I want to get into a conceptual discussion, but *sigh* it never happened.

Thanks for linking me, it's very much appreciated!

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:iconrisingmanes:
The thing is... sometimes, only faving work can be seen as a bad thing---like a random deviant on a faving spree with nothing deep to say. Some might even think deviants who fave but don't comment are just being attention whores. I know someone who appreciate any kind of comment along with a fave. Also, I try to convey the feeling, but I'm often not feeling like critiquing the concept and am busy with something else---this is particularly when I like it enough, but don't have tome to think of why.

And... *sigh* yes, consumerism is an evil of this world. But if you think what drives society is inherently evil, then what have you to believe in? What choice do you have, but to move to the green fields to live off the sustenance the planet gives you?

And, even then, will you have time to develop as an artist? I can only assume you need a lot of time and effort just to grow your food. In a way, technology helps us to grow. We just need to let it help us.

Sorry, the last two paragraphs were very off-topic.

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:iconaniseshaw:
no worries, I understand your point, but it's not quite on target with what my point is. I'm not saying consumerism is inherently evil, just that a by-product of its brainchild - marketing - promotes a lack of critique. The fact is, we don't need to buy nearly as much as we do, and not much would be harmed from less consumption. I'm not a proponent of removing consumption, just an advocate for educated consumption. The only way one can do that is through active consumption (as opposed to passive consumption), and one major component of active consumption is critique of advertising.

Lastly, I think it's important that you take the time to think of why you like things. How can you truly know yourself if you don't?

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:iconrisingmanes:
True. I often critique adverts, but it's mostly because I have a resentment towards them. I know what I want already---mostly video games, and that's because I've been a lifelong gamer and don't plan on giving up. It's my hobby. In fact... I don't watch much TV anymore because of adverts. Why have to sit through adverts when you can go on the 'Net and IGNORE them? Heck, there's even programs like Adblock.

I understand the need for clothes, etc. But that's being taken care of already.

As for the article itself, there are some complex terms that I don't understand. The golden rule I follow is... I comment on things that need commenting on, and on things that pretty much JUMP at me... like in here. But it is an interesting read... have you made this journal into a deviation already?

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:iconaniseshaw:
no, I'll definitely look into doing that soon!

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:iconfrhaine-shaia:
Hi there, I linked this to my recent journal. True, most often, the only critiques given to me are pointing out the negatives and never offering the conceptual analysis, (more to the point, I agree with `RockstarVanity). Somehow, that's not how I feel critiques are supposed to be...right?

Like for example, I've had several deviations that were criticized for thinking that those had improper proportions and the like, when in the point of fact, I've wanted them to be like that, or the proportions are affected by the clothing. There are artists that can see their own faults on their own deviations, but the viewers think it's wrong. I'm growing away from that.
Thanks for this lovely journal.
I've seen your other journal entries and they're very well-written and I enjoy them much. Thanks for sharing them. :)

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